Fiddling With A Vision Statement

Just saw this Vision Statement from a local biz, and must say it is impressive that this outfit cares enough to herald such a statement. Goes like this: "To provide, safe, professional tree removal and pruning by working with integrity, respecting customers, protecting the environment and fostering working conditions that encourage leadership, accountability and ownership.

Can't help myself. My gut told me to flip the presentation, so how about: To work with integrity, respecting customers, protecting the environment and fostering working conditions that encourage leadership, accountability and ownership by providing safe, professional tree removal and pruning. This way it seems clear to me that the work they do leads to impact on a broader scale by which they can ultimately be judged, and that they want to be judged  by more than the work they do. For me, restating it is akin to first things first...